Why can’t I comment directly on each story segment?
Comments are only allowed on the comment page for a particular segment. This was done to keep the segement intact and easy to read. I do read the comments, and especially those on grammer and spelling. I will edit and correct segements as needed, and may actually change a segment depending on how the story as a whole proceeds. This is a work in progress, and you are part of the story, so comments are needed to keep it alive.