Comments on ‘1 – I’ve got a bad feeling about this…’

This is Chapter one, and is only partially complete…

11/27/2012 — some minor fleshing out and the usual spelling and grammar.

 

3 thoughts on “Comments on ‘1 – I’ve got a bad feeling about this…’

  1. ‘She was “petite”. Full-bodied with red hair, she was my dream come true, my own Venus de Milo.’

    Might want a different analogy. Venus de Milo diesn’t have any arms in the present day!!

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